The other part of my communication system is pretty set, (finally colors look correct!) and I'm looking for critical feedback on major changes that may need to be made so please let me know if something looks out of place.
The first image is the outside of the folder, the second is the envelope, and the next two are the front and back of the comment card with a perforated card that has the user name and password for the site.
I think your folder looks really great, its fun and sleek. For the card it is a little difficult to read the white text on the yellow, on screen anyway, maybe changing the yellow to the green will fix it?
ReplyDeleteI agree with the solid shapes instead of the outlines, it gets a little busy with the lines.
I really like the way that you have used your pieces to create a cool identity. I shapes are great and the colors are working great to create a fun but simple design. Nothing seems too big of an issue for me
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